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Three Criteria for a Killer Title

My brain refuses to rest with a good title. It scrambles about until it finds the best one. That perfect fit. And searching for the best is not easy. Often times, for me, it either comes or it doesn’t.

When it comes, what a glorious feeling. But when it doesn’t? No fun at all. My brain turns into a stubborn donkey. The harder I push, the more it refuses to budge.

Which is exactly what happened these past couple weeks as my editor and I discussed potential titles for my debut novel. My brain refused to cooperate. Sure, I came up with a few suggestions. And some of those suggestions were okay. But none were great. None really resonated. None fit my idea of a strong title.

Which for me, involves three criteria:

It has to represent the story.
It can be the most poetic phrase I’ve ever read. But if it feels like the author forced the line into the book just to make the title fit, I don’t like it. I want a title that is unique and meaningful to not just a line in the book, but to the entire story. Some great examples would be Thin Places by Mary DeMuth, Walking on Broken Glass by Christa Allan, and of course, The Help by Kathryn Stockett or Room by Emma Donoghue. These titles not only sound cool, but are chock-full of meaning.

It has to be intriguing.
I don’t want it to sound like a million other titles already published on Amazon. I look for something different. Original. Not cliche. Something that elicits a sense of intrigue. A great example of this is Summer Snow by Nicole Baart. The juxtaposition of snow in summer catches my attention. Makes me curious. It’s what I aimed for when I came up with the working title for A Broken Kind of Beautiful (which isn’t my debut). We don’t often describe beauty as broken. If this book ever gets contracted, I hope the title stays the same.

It has to sound good.
Titles shouldn’t make tongues twist or noses wrinkle. They should be pleasing to read and say. I’m a big fan of alliteration. I love When Crickets Cry by Charles Martin. Not only is it intriguing, it’s poetic. The repeating C sound works really well. I bought this book because I fell in love with the title and I haven’t even read it yet. Talk about an effective marketing tool.

So I had these three criteria in my head, but my donkey of a brain could think of nothing. Yet despite my inability, my debut has an official name. One I’m very pleased with. All thanks to the talented editorial team that’s been brainstorming on my behalf.

The title is very meaningful to the story. It has a contradiction that will hopefully intrigue potential readers. And I like the way it sounds.

An added bonus?

It goes really well with Wishing on Willows, which is the official title of my second novel, scheduled for release in April, 2013. I like when titles go together. A great example of this is Jody Hedlund’s The Preacher’s Bride and The Doctor’s Lady. Or Rosslyn Elliott’s Fairer than Morning and Sweeter than Birdsong.

So….what is the official title of my debut novel?

You’ll have to come back on Wednesday to find out. In the meantime, here’s a hint.

Let’s Talk: How important are titles to you? What are some of your favorites? Have you ever bought a book just because you loved the title?

In case you missed it, I’m starting a new adventure with vlogging. Here’s my debut vlog. I’m hoping this will be a fresh, fun way to connect with readers. 

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A Vlogging Adventure

I’m always looking for fresh ways to connect with you guys. So guess what? I’m starting a new adventure.

Do you like how I’m rocking the book case in the background?

If you want to send me questions, I’d love to hear from you. I promise to answer them, whether that be via email or a vlog. You can send them to keganshert(at)gmail(dot)com. Or you can ask them on my Facebook Author Page.

On a different note, my debut novel has an official title! And it’s not Beneath a Velvet Sky. I’ll share next week, so stay tuned!

Let’s Talk: How do you feel about vlogging? I have to say, I was a skeptic at first. But then my agent started doing it, and I loved hearing her voice and seeing her face (in a non-stalkerish way, I promise you).

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Choices

Do you ever think about the craziness of life? All the choices? All the forks in the road? Accumulating over the course of your existence? Bringing you exactly where you are today?

Sometimes I find myself thinking about these pivotal moments that might not have seemed so monumental at the time.

Like when I chose to go to the University of Wisconsin instead of the University of Iowa. It was freshman year, in my dorm room in Madison, when I gave my life to Christ. Would I have done that in Iowa?

Or when I chose to take two years off after my freshman year so I could gain residency and pay in-state tuition. During my college intermission, I got a job as a receptionist and met my husband. Would we have met if I hadn’t taken those two years off?

Or when we chose to wait five years before having kids. Would my son be here if we’d decided to try earlier?

How different would my life look if I would have gone to Iowa, if I wouldn’t have married Ryan, if I never had my son?

Would I be writing?

What about all the people I know because I’m exactly where I’m at right now? Where would they be? What would they be doing? Would I be who I am today, would they be who they are today, if we never would have crossed paths?

Our lives and choices make splashes that ripple so much farther than we know.

I love looking back at those pivotal moments and seeing how God has orchestrated so many things, even before I knew Him, to bring me right here.

Living in Iowa. A stay-at-home mom. A wife. A writer. A believer.

Let’s Talk: What are some pivotal moments from your past? Do you ever think about what life would look like if you’d gone left instead of right?removetweetmeme