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Color Me Some Passions

“Three-dimensional characters in novels require three dimensional emotions, for in real life no person is entirely one thing.”

-Brandilyn Collins from her book, Getting Into Character.
While there are many ways to color passions, for the sake of brevity, I’m only going to focus on one particular aspect. If you want to learn the rest, you’ll just have to read Brandilyn’s book.
One way to color passions is to set the passion against its opposite. Allow me to explain…
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In this chapter, Brandilyn makes an analogy involving a pearl necklace. What happens if you wear a pearl necklace against a white sweater? Will the necklace stand out? No, of course not. But what happens if you wear the pearl necklace against a black velvet dress? Now we’re talkin’. Suddenly, the pearls in the necklace pop! We notice them. Why? Because we set them against their opposite.

Let’s say we make a character in our story cruel. Maybe it’s an abusive husband who physically and emotionally abuses his wife. We write a scene where he flies into a rage because his wife shrunk his favorite shirt in the wash. Let’s say he’s so angry, he backhands her, kicks her while she’s on the ground, and leaves her crumpled on the floor, weeping. Okay, so we know he’s a cruel guy. What could we do next? There are a lot of possibilities. But let’s imagine this…

After slamming the door and storming out of the house, he finds an abandoned baby bird in a fallen nest near his driveway. Let’s say this husband bends over, coddles the baby bird to his chest, and gently pets its beak. Does this action take away from his cruelty? Actually, quite the opposite. We’ve just taken the pearl necklace and set it against black velvet. His cruelty toward his wife is magnified. This is one way to color passions. Pretty cool, huh?
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Question to ponder: What are your favorite of all time characters? Why? I bet if you look closely, it’s because this character had colorful, three-dimensional passions.

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What Makes Me Put Down a Book

Lately, I have put down two books. Couldn’t finish ’em. I got about a little less than halfway through (I was trying very hard), but just had to say, “Fuggetaboutit”. I decided to ask myself why? What made these books putdownable? I came up with two reasons.

For the first book: The main character did something in her past that literally made my skin boil. Instant turn off. Whatever sympathies I had for her vanished. I put down the book and got this funny look on my face and thought, “Why in the world did the author do this?” I’m all for edgy inspirational fiction. I’m all for giving my characters flaws and murky pasts (that’s real life!). I do this with my own characters. So why did this particular character make me cringe? I don’t think it was the action itself, as much as it was the motivation behind the action. The motivation that drove this character to do what she did… it wasn’t there. At least not enough. So I put the book down.

For the second book: My disbelief was not suspended. I knew I was reading a book. Instead of getting sucked into the world, I knew I still sat in my living room, reading words off a page. What fun is that?

What lessons can I take from these two books?
1. If I have my characters do something bad, something a lot of people do not agree with, I better give that character one strong, compelling motivation to have done it.

2. My story world needs to be realistic. My characters need to be three-dimensional and my dialogue realistic. Disbelief needs to be suspended.

This first one is a little easier to fix. The second one… that’s a little tougher.

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The Ultimate Author

No, I’m not talking about Karen Kingsbury or Steven King. I’m talking about Yaweh, Yeshua, Abba, Wonderful Counselor, Alpha and Omega, Savior, King, Creator, Maker, Friend. The author of the universe. The author of salvation.

My prayer today, tomorrow, and for as long as I write Christian fiction is not that I would make it big in the publishing industry, not that I would write a best seller, but that I would write books that bring glory to the God who wrote everything first. The God who penned creation, who inscribed the universe in all its vastness, the ocean in all its mystery, the mountains in all their majesty, and the thousands of sunsets that paint our skies every evening. He created them all. And as glorious as all these are, how much more glorious is the Author who wrote them?

I pray my writing will always be a reflection of the ultimate Author.removetweetmeme