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An Unfortunate Case of Book Snobbery

One of the unfortunate side effects about reading all these craft books is what a snob I’ve turned into. I’ve checked out piles of books from the library. I’ve read the first few chapters of each one, but can’t seem to settle into a single one. I can’t tell you how many books I have half-read this summer before putting them aside in frustration.

When I examine the reason why, it all comes down to one very simple reason: the story doesn’t pull me in, my disbelief is not suspended. Instead of being taken to another world and living through the characters, I’ve been very aware that I’m lying in bed, or sitting on my sofa, reading off a page. And what fun is that? Very rare is the book that will allow me to turn off my internal editor. A Moment Between, by Nicole Baart, did that for me. It swept me away. I got lost in the story. And after searching and searching, I finally found another.

The book is called Home Another Way, by Christa Parrish. It’s her debut novel and was released in 2008. I’m only on chapter six, and already I love the main character – this incredibly flawed, incredibly bitter young woman named Sarah Graham. Christa’s voice is wonderful and poignant. The story is so real. And Sarah’s motivations for being flawed and bitter are so well established without giving any sort of back story dump. So if you’re looking for a story to sweep you away, to make you smile, to make you wonder, and to make you turn pages, I highly recommend Home Another Way. I’ll let you know more when I’m finished.

Question to Ponder: Are you a book snob? What are your favorite books?


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3 C’s – It’s Friday!

Cares:

I care about ice cream. Deeply. Especially the chocolate kind. And most especially the chocolate kind with caramel swirls.

This summer has made me realize, more than anything, how much I want to stay home with Brogan and write. I’ve been discussing this with God lately.
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Concerns:
Brogan has eczema. Not a big deal, but I feel so bad when I see the cracked, red skin in his elbow creases. Poor fella.
I made stuffed peppers for dinner last night and they were the epitome of bland. Does anybody have a yummy stuffed pepper recipe? Because the one I have is no good.
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Celebrations:
Through the Storm, my second book, is officially ready for submission. Thanks to my lovely critique partner, the final stage of revision is finished. I’m thinking I won’t start submitting until after the ACFW conference though… what do you think?
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I just looked at the July issue of Christian Fiction Online Magazine, and Michelle Sutton’s sneak peak for the August issue mentions my short story. And my blogging friend, Wendy Miller’s too! I got this burst of excitment about being published…even if it is only a short story.
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Happy Independence Day! Enjoy the fireworks!
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Question to Ponder: What are your cares, concerns, and celebrations on this fine Friday morning?

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Writing Tight: Compression

Actors have to be very deliberate in their movement, tone, and expression. They must choose carefully if they want to give the best portrayal of their character. This is the same for writers. My last blog from Getting Into Character by Brandilyn Collins is taken from Secret # 6, Restraint and Control. She discusses many things in this chapter, but for the sake of being…well, compressed… I’m just going to focus on compression.

What is compression? In Brandilyn’s own words, “compression means finding verbs, adjectives and nouns that are packed with meaning.” Brandilyn says that when you compress your writing, two things happen:

1. Your writing will be more vivid
2. your writing will be tighter

When you write, you want to write tight. Writers hear this a lot. We don’t want superflous words and phrases muddying up our stories. So compression is vital. The key to compression is effective word choice, eliminating excess words, and ruthless editing.

Here’s a very short example of before (compression) and after (compression):

Before:
Brogan sat down in the middle of the floor, took his pacifier out of his mouth, and let out a loud and high-pitched cry.
After:
Brogan plopped onto the floor, uncorked his Nuk, and unleashed an angry wail.
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Questions to Ponder: What kind of reader are you? When you read books, do you like reading long, flowing prose, or do you like the author to get to the point already? What kind of writer are you? Do you write tight the first time around, or is compression something you focus on during revision?

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