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In one of the continuing education classes from the ACFW conference, author Gayle Roper posed some questions writers should ask when writing a novel. Here are some of them:

Why are you writing this story?
If you can’t answer that question, then that could mean trouble. Knowing why keeps us focused when our stories start to drift.

Can you explain your novel in 20 words?
Yikes! 20 words! Here’s a bigger challenge: Can you do it without using cliche generalities? Can you be very specific, so that whoever may be listening can get a sense of your story’s essence?

What is your character arc?
How does the main character change from the beginning of the novel to the end? Also, if you write for the CBA, what is the spiritual arc?

What is your main character’s personality type and how does it conflict with the antagonist or romantic lead?
Here is a model of four personality types based on four humors of the body (something a bit simpler than the Meyer-Briggs model):

  • Sanguine – outgoing, extroverted, the “life of the party”, looking for fun and a good time, unorganized, forgetful, make friends easily
  • Choleric – a d0er, a Martha, an ambitious person who likes to be in control, these are often leaders, extroverted
  • Melancholic – the creative, reflective introvert, a perfectionist, these people often feel deeply and think deeply
  • Phlegmatic – passive, easygoing, agreeable, often introverted, relaxed, affectionate, a people-pleaser, avoids conflict

Think how differently these character types would interact. How might you play with these in order to maximize conflict? How might a certain personality type affect your character’s relationship with God?

Are your characters likable?
Even the bad guys? Have you built in something (a pet-the-dog moment) that allows your audience to identify with them? Basically, you want to humanize all of your characters. Make them easy to identify with.

What are your characters’ back stories and how do they affect the story “now”?
What kind of family did they come from? A family that encouraged or discouraged? How does this shape the way in which your character sees the world? And is this perception accurate, or way off? How does it impact the decisions they make in the present story world?

Those are just some of the questions I took away from Gayle’s class. I’d love to know…

What question do you find most useful? What other questions might be helpful to consider when writing a novel? And for fun – what personality type are you?

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3 C’s – It’s Friday!

Cares:
I have some news.

Concerns:
I cannot share it for awhile.

Celebrations:
I have some news!

AND….

Today is a comp day because of Parent Teacher conferences this past week. I survived! Now I get to cuddle with my boy and do some brainstorming during naptime. Maybe watch a romantic movie. Any suggestions?

Question to Ponder: What are your cares, concerns, and celebrations today?removetweetmeme

Writing the Story Premise

What is a story premise?
A story premise answers the question: What is my story about? And does so as succinctly as possible.

Why is a premise important?
It focuses your story.

How do you write one?
Let me introduce you to my good buddy Dwight Swain. Can I just say that Techniques of the Selling Writer is one of my all time favorite craft books? Some people say it’s a laborious read. I say the labor is well worth it.

According to Dwight, a story premise has five elements:

  • Character
  • Situation (what’s the backdrop of trouble that forces character to act?)
  • Objective (character’s story goal)
  • Opponent (no opponent = no conflict = no story)
  • Disaster (the unutterably awful thing that could happen)

You should do your best to make each of these elements as specific and concrete as possible, and put them together to form two sentences. No more. No less.

Sentence 1: A statement that establishes character, situation, and objective

Sentence 2: A question that pinpoints the opponent and disaster.

There is wide-spread debate over whether or not to put a question in your premise. You decide if you want to make the second sentence a question or not.

Let’s look at the Wizard of Oz.

  • Character: Dorothy
  • Situation: tornado brings her to Oz
  • Objective: get to the Wizard of Oz so she go home
  • Opponent: the wicked witch of the west, who wants her ruby slippers
  • Disaster: never going home

Sentence 1: When a tornado drops her house in the middle of a strange world (situation), a teenage girl named Dorothy (character) must find her way to Oz so she can talk the wizard into sending her home (objective).

Sentence 2: But will the wicked witch of the west, who wants Dorothy’s magic slippers (opponent), stop her from ever seeing home again (disaster)?

Put it together and you get the premise of Wizard of Oz:

When a tornado drops her house in the middle of a strange world, a teenage girl named Dorothy must find her way to Oz so she can talk the wizard into sending her home. But will the Wicked Witch of the West, who wants Dorothy’s magic slippers, stop her from ever seeing home again?

Here’s an example from one of my novels:

  • Character: widowed mother, Robin Price
  • Situation: neighboring businesses are struggling and so is her cafe
  • Goal: keep her husband’s memory alive through the walls of her cafe
  • Opponent: handsome project manager who wants to buy her out
  • Disaster: losing everything she’s held on to since her husband died

Premise: Even though business isn’t doing well, widowed mother, Robin Price, is determined to keep her husband’s memory alive through the walls of her cafe. But when a handsome and charming businessman comes to town with plans to buy her out, will Robin lose everything she’s held on to since her husband’s death?

Question to Ponder: Have you ever written a premise? What do you include? Do you follow Swain’s formula, or do you have one of your own? If you have any tips, please share them here!

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